Dear Readers,
I am a 4th grade teacher in Lincoln, Nebraska. My students have been working very hard in becoming stronger writers. As part of a motivation to them, we have begun a blog spot. This blog is designed to help the students publish some of their stories and share there ideas and thoughts with others. I hope that you enjoy their hard work. They would love it if you would take some time to comment on a few. Please focus on the positives, but make some constructive criticisms. Thank you.
Sincerely,
Mrs. Johnson
Thursday, December 20, 2007
Wednesday, December 5, 2007
By Daqwan, This weekend
This weekend I had stay in the house and play. So, I got sleepy by looking out the window.
So I had went to go to sleep.It was on a snowy cold wind blowing day.I was in my
house with my mom, sisters, brothers and I . was all had went to sleep in are cozy bed.
They all woke up my little sister had ran to my room and said'' wake up wake up. I had look up and told her it was snowing outside.I got up and ran out my room and told my mom can I build a snowman. No she said''. You don't have no snow boots. Then, I said'' I don't need no snow boot. Next, I had said'' do,, my,, brother,, have,, some,,snow boots,,? My mom said'' you can't fit some of is shoe. The snow was so white and soft that if you run in it will get foot prints. I had ran and open the first window I saw. I look out the window and saw a man shoveling some snow.
Finally I had found some of my uncle boots I said'' can I fit this boots. NO, NO, those are muddy boots,Afterwords, my mom said'' you is not going outside. THE END
So I had went to go to sleep.It was on a snowy cold wind blowing day.I was in my
house with my mom, sisters, brothers and I . was all had went to sleep in are cozy bed.
They all woke up my little sister had ran to my room and said'' wake up wake up. I had look up and told her it was snowing outside.I got up and ran out my room and told my mom can I build a snowman. No she said''. You don't have no snow boots. Then, I said'' I don't need no snow boot. Next, I had said'' do,, my,, brother,, have,, some,,snow boots,,? My mom said'' you can't fit some of is shoe. The snow was so white and soft that if you run in it will get foot prints. I had ran and open the first window I saw. I look out the window and saw a man shoveling some snow.
Finally I had found some of my uncle boots I said'' can I fit this boots. NO, NO, those are muddy boots,Afterwords, my mom said'' you is not going outside. THE END
Monday, December 3, 2007
Anna's Party By: Maverick
One day, I woke up to the smell of cake. I thought in my head that's weird. So, I ran downstairs. I saw my Mom baking a cake. I asked her, "Why are you baking a cake?" She said that it was for our cousin, Anna.
It was my cousin's birthday! I got her Brat Dolls. My brother got her a puzzle. It was a Shrek puzzle.
My cousin, Blake, was playing an American Idol karaoke game. Blake challenged me. I beat him in a match. My brother bot beat by my cousin, Anna. We stayed up late playing X-Box.
I hope that she has another fun birthday like this year!
It was my cousin's birthday! I got her Brat Dolls. My brother got her a puzzle. It was a Shrek puzzle.
My cousin, Blake, was playing an American Idol karaoke game. Blake challenged me. I beat him in a match. My brother bot beat by my cousin, Anna. We stayed up late playing X-Box.
I hope that she has another fun birthday like this year!
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