One day, I woke up to the smell of cake. I thought in my head that's weird. So, I ran downstairs. I saw my Mom baking a cake. I asked her, "Why are you baking a cake?" She said that it was for our cousin, Anna.
It was my cousin's birthday! I got her Brat Dolls. My brother got her a puzzle. It was a Shrek puzzle.
My cousin, Blake, was playing an American Idol karaoke game. Blake challenged me. I beat him in a match. My brother bot beat by my cousin, Anna. We stayed up late playing X-Box.
I hope that she has another fun birthday like this year!
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3 comments:
I enjoyed reading your story about your cousin's birthday. You are wise to write about an event or experience that is important to you. Those types of stories tend to well written and hold special meaning for the writer! Your story was well written! :)
Mr. Hoffart
I loved the introduction to your story. It really made me want to read more. I will be anxious to read more stories from you!
Mrs. Zetterman
Maverick
It sounds like you had a really great time on your cousin Anna's birthday. I loved the way you started your story by telling us about how you smelled the cake baking.
If you continue working on this story, maybe you could finish it by telling us how the cake tasted!
Mrs. Fuller
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